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		<title>By: Kelly</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Aug 2010 03:54:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Shane—The truest horror story I could tell was right there at the top of the page. LOL.</description>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Aug 2010 01:49:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Kelly: I liked this style. Mixing the challenge into the story. :)</description>
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		<title>By: Kelly</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Aug 2010 14:44:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>THE END

From the word &lt;strong&gt;bloodshed&lt;/strong&gt;, I knew this Challenge was going to be the toughest. The harder Shane pushes in one direction, the more I &lt;strong&gt;scream&lt;/strong&gt; for a way around his “random” word generation—but now Jamie seemed to leave me no choice! I might have expected it. Where could I take this group, that it wasn’t already leading me? &lt;strong&gt;Adrenaline&lt;/strong&gt; raced through my veins, imagining the horror themes I might invent. &lt;strong&gt;Carefully&lt;/strong&gt; I peered into the heart of my &lt;strong&gt;darkness&lt;/strong&gt;, knowing that I’ve lived more &lt;strong&gt;ominous&lt;/strong&gt; plots than I care to pen. I do let some &lt;strong&gt;creepy&lt;/strong&gt; inner workings out in this creative space, but following the Challenge’s carefully-crafted path this time seemed too easy.

Or was I really hiding a &lt;strong&gt;paranoia&lt;/strong&gt;, that I’ll be found out as a mere hack? Does this intense &lt;strong&gt;silence&lt;/strong&gt; howl that I’m not up to it?

I steeled myself for the attempt.

&lt;strong&gt;Breathe&lt;/strong&gt;, if somewhat shallowly, and begin…

Or end.

;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>THE END</p>
<p>From the word <strong>bloodshed</strong>, I knew this Challenge was going to be the toughest. The harder Shane pushes in one direction, the more I <strong>scream</strong> for a way around his “random” word generation—but now Jamie seemed to leave me no choice! I might have expected it. Where could I take this group, that it wasn’t already leading me? <strong>Adrenaline</strong> raced through my veins, imagining the horror themes I might invent. <strong>Carefully</strong> I peered into the heart of my <strong>darkness</strong>, knowing that I’ve lived more <strong>ominous</strong> plots than I care to pen. I do let some <strong>creepy</strong> inner workings out in this creative space, but following the Challenge’s carefully-crafted path this time seemed too easy.</p>
<p>Or was I really hiding a <strong>paranoia</strong>, that I’ll be found out as a mere hack? Does this intense <strong>silence</strong> howl that I’m not up to it?</p>
<p>I steeled myself for the attempt.</p>
<p><strong>Breathe</strong>, if somewhat shallowly, and begin…</p>
<p>Or end.</p>
<p> <img src='http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Aug 2010 01:47:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Becca: It sure is heating up now. I enjoyed this one. Enjoyed it indeed.</description>
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		<title>By: Becca Campbell</title>
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		<dc:creator>Becca Campbell</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Aug 2010 21:31:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;em&gt;Part 28&lt;/em&gt;

Jax felt as though he’d slipped from a digital universe into an analog world. Everything was black and white, grainy, and not quite real. Almost like being in a dream. A strange &lt;strong&gt;paranoia&lt;/strong&gt; snuck over him. Where was he?
 
He took in the scene before him. He was mid-way up in a multi-story building. Modern artwork lined the gently curving walls of the perimeter. The large open center of the room allowed him a view of the airy atrium below. Moving throughout the room without meaning to, he noticed that the floor sloped gradually, effectively merging all stories together as one gigantic ramp that spiraled down from top to bottom. The view up through the center of the building gave him the impression of being inside a giant conch shell, with the organic curve of each floor’s consecutive balcony forming the interior skeleton.
 
He knew this place.
 
Jax wracked his brain, certain that he’d never actually been here before. But something about it was definitely familiar. &lt;strong&gt;Adrenaline&lt;/strong&gt; pumped through him. He felt so close to the answer. &lt;em&gt;Think, Jax!&lt;/em&gt; And then words popped into his brain. &lt;em&gt;Guggenheim. Frank Lloyd Wright&lt;/em&gt;. With the words came other images, but not from this dim reality. Those scenes of the place, including the outside were trapped in his mind and unavailable to his eyes. They were in full color, high quality – photographs, he realized. He’d seen pictures of this famous piece of architecture somewhere in his unremembered past.
 
The people around him were perusing the art, not a crowd, but a small scattering throughout the place. He watched a middle aged couple as they visually drank in one of the paintings. They gazed at the solid square of gray as if in awe of the masterpiece before them. He tried to speak, to question how he got here, but nothing came out. Watching the other patrons, it dawned on him that no one here could see him. Was he a ghost?

An &lt;strong&gt;ominous&lt;/strong&gt; feeling crept over him, chilling his insides. He was just about to reach out and try to touch the rail of the balcony in front of him – to see if it would resist his hand or if he would pass right through it like a vapor – but at that instant, the room disappeared.
 
He blinked, trying to clarify his vision. Still fuzzy, he saw in all gray tones that he was outside in the middle of a field. A little girl in a sundress (she looked about four years old) was taking advantage of the wildflowers that were prolific here. She plucked one from the ground as if it were a prized treasure and &lt;strong&gt;carefully&lt;/strong&gt; tucked it behind her ear. Then, one at a time, she gathered a bundle of the blossoms, apparently unconcerned with their dreary lack of color. Putting them to her nose, she took a big whiff of the scent and smiled broadly.
 
Once her bouquet was full, she turned and danced across the field. It was at that moment that Jax saw the other people. A short distance off, a man and woman sat on a checked blanket. The girl’s arrival broke the gaze held between them. The woman smiled and reached out as the girl gifted her with the bunch of wildflowers. She put them to her face and smelled them. The man continued to watch the woman until she returned his attention. He smiled at her and pulled her close, burying his nose in her hair. Closing his eyes, he &lt;strong&gt;breathe&lt;/strong&gt;d in deeply and she laughed soundlessly at his affection.
 
The field and small family in it flickered and were gone. He wasn’t outside anymore. He was in an enormous darkened music hall. Every seat in the auditorium was filled. The audience sat in awed stillness, their gaze fixed on the illuminated orchestra. On the elevated stage a multitude of formally clad musicians each played his or her instrument with intense passion. But Jax could not hear a sound. There was only &lt;strong&gt;silence&lt;/strong&gt;, like watching a muted television program.
 
A flash. Another scene. This one had the &lt;strong&gt;creepy&lt;/strong&gt; overtones that came from Jax sharing an intimate encounter with a couple. Specifically, he was standing at the foot of their bed. The man and woman, clad in only sheets, seemed to be having a cozy conversation, she lying on her back looking into the man’s eyes and he on his side, leaning on his elbow, eyes locked her face.
 
Jax’s insides crawled as he watched unwillingly. He tried to escape, to back up, to exit the room as quickly as possible, but he was unable to move. If the man spotted him, he knew he was going to be in a world of trouble. What kind of scum spied on people like this? There might very well be &lt;strong&gt;bloodshed&lt;/strong&gt; and from the looks of that guy’s muscled arms, it wouldn’t be his.
 
The man’s gaze flickered up at the window for a moment and then back to his beloved, the adoring smile on his lips never once faltering. Jax’s heart skipped a beat, realizing that again he couldn’t be seen. Somehow he was frozen here, forced to watch whatever was placed before him. There must be a reason for these scenes. But what?
 
He scanned the room, realizing he was also unable to turn his head or change the view whatsoever. What was important about this picture, about all of them?
 
Still uncomfortable, he forced himself to take in every detail of the interaction. The man was still talking, without sound, and his fingers gently trailed up the woman’s arm, from wrist to shoulder. He lightly cupped her cheek in his hand and leaned forward to press his lips on hers. Just as the scene died away, Jax realized what it was. &lt;em&gt;Touch&lt;/em&gt;.
 
His vision went black for a second, but his mind analyzed with speedy efficiency the five scenes he’d just witnessed. The restaurant – &lt;em&gt;taste&lt;/em&gt;. The art museum – &lt;em&gt;sight&lt;/em&gt;. The girl with the flowers – &lt;em&gt;smell&lt;/em&gt;. The concert hall – &lt;em&gt;hearing&lt;/em&gt;. It was the five senses again. What was the connection between these and the mysterious rooms in the building?
 
He processed all these thoughts in a fraction of a second – the amount of time that it took for the last scene to dissolve into blackness and be replaced by a new view. He was back in the solitary room in the building. His sight was normal again. And he was still strapped to the metal chair. He’d never left?
 
The waves hovered in the air around him, as if waiting for something.
 
“So what’s the point?” he asked aloud. “Five rooms to appeal to the five senses. Five scenes, each focused on one of them.” He looked at the ripples, wondering if it was too much to expect some type of answer. “So you’re obsessed with senses. But why show me them this way?” Who was he talking to, anyway? He had no idea, but something kept him going. It was that ever-present compulsion to find the answer.
 
 “If you’re trying to make me experience things, there’s one problem. I’m just an observer here. I couldn’t hear anything. I couldn’t taste or touch or smell anything either. And my sight was greatly limited – the visions aren’t even in color, for Pete’s sake. Is that really the best you can do?”
 
He looked at the distortions again, at the moment not concerned about his well-being. He wanted to solve the puzzle. Cocking his head thoughtfully, he spoke again.
 
“You can’t fool me with cheap imitations. I know those aren’t real. They’re more like…well like a distant memory than a reality.”
 
At that, the waves converged on him again, and this time his curiosity trumped fear. He felt the light &lt;em&gt;zap&lt;/em&gt; of the electrical current again, but it wasn’t enough to cause serious pain.
 
A new scene. Black and white. He was in a small bedroom. &lt;strong&gt;Darkness&lt;/strong&gt; cloaked the room except where a thin trail of moonlight illuminated a figure, lying on her side in bed. The woman’s back was to him but he could see the outline of her curves through the sheets. Completely still, she appeared fast asleep, completely oblivious to her observer. But after a moment, she rolled onto her back and he saw her face. His pulse raced when he recognized the gentle curve of the cheek, the closed lids, and the thick curls framing her face. &lt;em&gt;Kel&lt;/em&gt;.
 
He wanted to &lt;strong&gt;scream&lt;/strong&gt; her name, but he was unable to make a sound. What was &lt;em&gt;she&lt;/em&gt; doing in these visions? His thoughts were chaotic and disorganized. Had she made it back? Was there was some sort of video feed watching her? Were somehow these electrical waves able to project the image into his mind? That kind of technology seemed farfetched, but there &lt;em&gt;had&lt;/em&gt; to be an answer.
 
His eyes stayed on her even when he felt the sensation of movement. It was as if he was floating through the room. But he was unable to keep focus on her as he passed through the closed door and down the darkened hall. The vision stopped him in front of another door. It was at that moment that he recognized the house and its familiar layout. Even before materializing through the closed door, he knew exactly what he’d see on the other side. A bedroom. &lt;em&gt;His&lt;/em&gt; bedroom…from before.

But one thing he didn’t expect. There, lying in his bed, was a man. In his sleep, he tossed and turned, a frown creasing his brow, the picture of pure restlessness. His hands clenched and his face distorted as he suffered silently from an unseen nightmare. Jax stared at the face, framed by a mess of tangled dark hair.
 
The man was himself.</description>
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<p>Jax felt as though he’d slipped from a digital universe into an analog world. Everything was black and white, grainy, and not quite real. Almost like being in a dream. A strange <strong>paranoia</strong> snuck over him. Where was he?<br />
 <br />
He took in the scene before him. He was mid-way up in a multi-story building. Modern artwork lined the gently curving walls of the perimeter. The large open center of the room allowed him a view of the airy atrium below. Moving throughout the room without meaning to, he noticed that the floor sloped gradually, effectively merging all stories together as one gigantic ramp that spiraled down from top to bottom. The view up through the center of the building gave him the impression of being inside a giant conch shell, with the organic curve of each floor’s consecutive balcony forming the interior skeleton.<br />
 <br />
He knew this place.<br />
 <br />
Jax wracked his brain, certain that he’d never actually been here before. But something about it was definitely familiar. <strong>Adrenaline</strong> pumped through him. He felt so close to the answer. <em>Think, Jax!</em> And then words popped into his brain. <em>Guggenheim. Frank Lloyd Wright</em>. With the words came other images, but not from this dim reality. Those scenes of the place, including the outside were trapped in his mind and unavailable to his eyes. They were in full color, high quality – photographs, he realized. He’d seen pictures of this famous piece of architecture somewhere in his unremembered past.<br />
 <br />
The people around him were perusing the art, not a crowd, but a small scattering throughout the place. He watched a middle aged couple as they visually drank in one of the paintings. They gazed at the solid square of gray as if in awe of the masterpiece before them. He tried to speak, to question how he got here, but nothing came out. Watching the other patrons, it dawned on him that no one here could see him. Was he a ghost?</p>
<p>An <strong>ominous</strong> feeling crept over him, chilling his insides. He was just about to reach out and try to touch the rail of the balcony in front of him – to see if it would resist his hand or if he would pass right through it like a vapor – but at that instant, the room disappeared.<br />
 <br />
He blinked, trying to clarify his vision. Still fuzzy, he saw in all gray tones that he was outside in the middle of a field. A little girl in a sundress (she looked about four years old) was taking advantage of the wildflowers that were prolific here. She plucked one from the ground as if it were a prized treasure and <strong>carefully</strong> tucked it behind her ear. Then, one at a time, she gathered a bundle of the blossoms, apparently unconcerned with their dreary lack of color. Putting them to her nose, she took a big whiff of the scent and smiled broadly.<br />
 <br />
Once her bouquet was full, she turned and danced across the field. It was at that moment that Jax saw the other people. A short distance off, a man and woman sat on a checked blanket. The girl’s arrival broke the gaze held between them. The woman smiled and reached out as the girl gifted her with the bunch of wildflowers. She put them to her face and smelled them. The man continued to watch the woman until she returned his attention. He smiled at her and pulled her close, burying his nose in her hair. Closing his eyes, he <strong>breathe</strong>d in deeply and she laughed soundlessly at his affection.<br />
 <br />
The field and small family in it flickered and were gone. He wasn’t outside anymore. He was in an enormous darkened music hall. Every seat in the auditorium was filled. The audience sat in awed stillness, their gaze fixed on the illuminated orchestra. On the elevated stage a multitude of formally clad musicians each played his or her instrument with intense passion. But Jax could not hear a sound. There was only <strong>silence</strong>, like watching a muted television program.<br />
 <br />
A flash. Another scene. This one had the <strong>creepy</strong> overtones that came from Jax sharing an intimate encounter with a couple. Specifically, he was standing at the foot of their bed. The man and woman, clad in only sheets, seemed to be having a cozy conversation, she lying on her back looking into the man’s eyes and he on his side, leaning on his elbow, eyes locked her face.<br />
 <br />
Jax’s insides crawled as he watched unwillingly. He tried to escape, to back up, to exit the room as quickly as possible, but he was unable to move. If the man spotted him, he knew he was going to be in a world of trouble. What kind of scum spied on people like this? There might very well be <strong>bloodshed</strong> and from the looks of that guy’s muscled arms, it wouldn’t be his.<br />
 <br />
The man’s gaze flickered up at the window for a moment and then back to his beloved, the adoring smile on his lips never once faltering. Jax’s heart skipped a beat, realizing that again he couldn’t be seen. Somehow he was frozen here, forced to watch whatever was placed before him. There must be a reason for these scenes. But what?<br />
 <br />
He scanned the room, realizing he was also unable to turn his head or change the view whatsoever. What was important about this picture, about all of them?<br />
 <br />
Still uncomfortable, he forced himself to take in every detail of the interaction. The man was still talking, without sound, and his fingers gently trailed up the woman’s arm, from wrist to shoulder. He lightly cupped her cheek in his hand and leaned forward to press his lips on hers. Just as the scene died away, Jax realized what it was. <em>Touch</em>.<br />
 <br />
His vision went black for a second, but his mind analyzed with speedy efficiency the five scenes he’d just witnessed. The restaurant – <em>taste</em>. The art museum – <em>sight</em>. The girl with the flowers – <em>smell</em>. The concert hall – <em>hearing</em>. It was the five senses again. What was the connection between these and the mysterious rooms in the building?<br />
 <br />
He processed all these thoughts in a fraction of a second – the amount of time that it took for the last scene to dissolve into blackness and be replaced by a new view. He was back in the solitary room in the building. His sight was normal again. And he was still strapped to the metal chair. He’d never left?<br />
 <br />
The waves hovered in the air around him, as if waiting for something.<br />
 <br />
“So what’s the point?” he asked aloud. “Five rooms to appeal to the five senses. Five scenes, each focused on one of them.” He looked at the ripples, wondering if it was too much to expect some type of answer. “So you’re obsessed with senses. But why show me them this way?” Who was he talking to, anyway? He had no idea, but something kept him going. It was that ever-present compulsion to find the answer.<br />
 <br />
 “If you’re trying to make me experience things, there’s one problem. I’m just an observer here. I couldn’t hear anything. I couldn’t taste or touch or smell anything either. And my sight was greatly limited – the visions aren’t even in color, for Pete’s sake. Is that really the best you can do?”<br />
 <br />
He looked at the distortions again, at the moment not concerned about his well-being. He wanted to solve the puzzle. Cocking his head thoughtfully, he spoke again.<br />
 <br />
“You can’t fool me with cheap imitations. I know those aren’t real. They’re more like…well like a distant memory than a reality.”<br />
 <br />
At that, the waves converged on him again, and this time his curiosity trumped fear. He felt the light <em>zap</em> of the electrical current again, but it wasn’t enough to cause serious pain.<br />
 <br />
A new scene. Black and white. He was in a small bedroom. <strong>Darkness</strong> cloaked the room except where a thin trail of moonlight illuminated a figure, lying on her side in bed. The woman’s back was to him but he could see the outline of her curves through the sheets. Completely still, she appeared fast asleep, completely oblivious to her observer. But after a moment, she rolled onto her back and he saw her face. His pulse raced when he recognized the gentle curve of the cheek, the closed lids, and the thick curls framing her face. <em>Kel</em>.<br />
 <br />
He wanted to <strong>scream</strong> her name, but he was unable to make a sound. What was <em>she</em> doing in these visions? His thoughts were chaotic and disorganized. Had she made it back? Was there was some sort of video feed watching her? Were somehow these electrical waves able to project the image into his mind? That kind of technology seemed farfetched, but there <em>had</em> to be an answer.<br />
 <br />
His eyes stayed on her even when he felt the sensation of movement. It was as if he was floating through the room. But he was unable to keep focus on her as he passed through the closed door and down the darkened hall. The vision stopped him in front of another door. It was at that moment that he recognized the house and its familiar layout. Even before materializing through the closed door, he knew exactly what he’d see on the other side. A bedroom. <em>His</em> bedroom…from before.</p>
<p>But one thing he didn’t expect. There, lying in his bed, was a man. In his sleep, he tossed and turned, a frown creasing his brow, the picture of pure restlessness. His hands clenched and his face distorted as he suffered silently from an unseen nightmare. Jax stared at the face, framed by a mess of tangled dark hair.<br />
 <br />
The man was himself.</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Jul 2010 20:03:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Angie: Hey there. Welcome back. Can you believe it&#039;s been 56 challenges ago since you submitted last. Amazing how fast time goes. 
Great submission. Write on.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Angie: Hey there. Welcome back. Can you believe it&#8217;s been 56 challenges ago since you submitted last. Amazing how fast time goes.<br />
Great submission. Write on.</p>
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		<title>By: Angie Nikoleychuk</title>
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		<dc:creator>Angie Nikoleychuk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Jul 2010 19:44:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Adrenaline drummed in Luke&#039;s ears as he carefully made his way up the ominous stone stairway. He wished it was just paranoia, but he knew this creepy feeling wasn&#039;t going to go away til he found her. There couldn&#039;t be any more bloodshed tonight! He tried to breathe, but his lungs ached. Suddenly, a scream broke the night&#039;s silence and darkness enveloped him.
 
I had a big ol long one, but decided to keep it and make it into a short story instead lol *sigh*</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Adrenaline drummed in Luke&#8217;s ears as he carefully made his way up the ominous stone stairway. He wished it was just paranoia, but he knew this creepy feeling wasn&#8217;t going to go away til he found her. There couldn&#8217;t be any more bloodshed tonight! He tried to breathe, but his lungs ached. Suddenly, a scream broke the night&#8217;s silence and darkness enveloped him.<br />
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I had a big ol long one, but decided to keep it and make it into a short story instead lol *sigh*</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Jul 2010 19:58:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Elantra: That&#039;s real cool. :)</description>
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		<title>By: elantra</title>
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		<dc:creator>elantra</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Jul 2010 19:53:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>from a exquisite movie called Gaberiel. then some of them i just made up. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>from a exquisite movie called Gaberiel. then some of them i just made up. </p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-60/comment-page-1/#comment-6957</link>
		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Jul 2010 14:11:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Aaron: Holy you know what! That&#039;s a damn good twist at the end. This one had me grinning at the end. Well done.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Aaron: Holy you know what! That&#8217;s a damn good twist at the end. This one had me grinning at the end. Well done.</p>
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