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		<title>By: Creative Copy Challenge &#171; troyworman.com &#124;</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-13/comment-page-1/#comment-9543</link>
		<dc:creator>Creative Copy Challenge &#171; troyworman.com &#124;</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Nov 2010 05:49:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] CCC13 [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-13/comment-page-1/#comment-9183</link>
		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Oct 2010 02:51:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Steven: I don&#039;t think I&#039;ve ever read another CCC submission that took such an unexpected curve at the end. Super neat stuff.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Steven: I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;ve ever read another CCC submission that took such an unexpected curve at the end. Super neat stuff.</p>
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		<title>By: Steven A. Lowe</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-13/comment-page-1/#comment-9175</link>
		<dc:creator>Steven A. Lowe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Oct 2010 02:11:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Would I? What a question! A flurry of responses blew through my mind like a blizzard.

The uniform is a mask. I looked right through him: an &lt;strong&gt;imposter&lt;/strong&gt;, like every other &lt;strong&gt;rancid&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;strong&gt;womanizer&lt;/strong&gt; in this &lt;strong&gt;cesspool&lt;/strong&gt;.

The &lt;strong&gt;paycheck&lt;/strong&gt; is &lt;strong&gt;just an illusion&lt;/strong&gt;, a &lt;strong&gt;shield&lt;/strong&gt; from poor reality.
No matter, life&#039;s &lt;strong&gt;glacier&lt;/strong&gt; erases the &lt;strong&gt;tablet&lt;/strong&gt;.

Where is this going? Take a deep breath. Hold it. Maybe he didn&#039;t mean it that way. Exhale. Wait. Count to ten. Breathe. Calm.

I replied, &quot;No, I don&#039;t want fries with that, but give me a large &lt;strong&gt;Coke&lt;/strong&gt; to go.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Would I? What a question! A flurry of responses blew through my mind like a blizzard.</p>
<p>The uniform is a mask. I looked right through him: an <strong>imposter</strong>, like every other <strong>rancid</strong> <strong>womanizer</strong> in this <strong>cesspool</strong>.</p>
<p>The <strong>paycheck</strong> is <strong>just an illusion</strong>, a <strong>shield</strong> from poor reality.<br />
No matter, life&#8217;s <strong>glacier</strong> erases the <strong>tablet</strong>.</p>
<p>Where is this going? Take a deep breath. Hold it. Maybe he didn&#8217;t mean it that way. Exhale. Wait. Count to ten. Breathe. Calm.</p>
<p>I replied, &#8220;No, I don&#8217;t want fries with that, but give me a large <strong>Coke</strong> to go.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Sara</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-13/comment-page-1/#comment-8724</link>
		<dc:creator>Sara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Oct 2010 07:56:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;It&#039;s just an &lt;strong&gt;illusion&lt;/strong&gt;,&quot; muttered Sam, scribbling rabidly on his &lt;strong&gt;tablet&lt;/strong&gt;.

Tina attempted to &lt;strong&gt;shield &lt;/strong&gt;her eyes, trying to see what he was sketching. &quot;Which one, ice bitch with the &lt;strong&gt;glacier &lt;/strong&gt;hair, or skeezy &lt;strong&gt;cesspool &lt;/strong&gt;strung out on &lt;strong&gt;coke&lt;/strong&gt;, or the &lt;strong&gt;womanizer&lt;/strong&gt; staring at my tits?&quot;

Sam huffed a cross between a chuckle and a sigh of exasperation. &quot;None of the above.  The &lt;strong&gt;rancid&lt;/strong&gt;-looking beggar over there; he&#039;s an &lt;strong&gt;imposter&lt;/strong&gt;. I saw him walking into a high-rise last week. I think it&#039;s a scam, and I&#039;m going to bust his ass.&quot;

His girlfriend snorted. &quot;Whatever gets you that &lt;strong&gt;paycheck&lt;/strong&gt;, hoss.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;It&#8217;s just an <strong>illusion</strong>,&#8221; muttered Sam, scribbling rabidly on his <strong>tablet</strong>.</p>
<p>Tina attempted to <strong>shield </strong>her eyes, trying to see what he was sketching. &#8220;Which one, ice bitch with the <strong>glacier </strong>hair, or skeezy <strong>cesspool </strong>strung out on <strong>coke</strong>, or the <strong>womanizer</strong> staring at my tits?&#8221;</p>
<p>Sam huffed a cross between a chuckle and a sigh of exasperation. &#8220;None of the above.  The <strong>rancid</strong>-looking beggar over there; he&#8217;s an <strong>imposter</strong>. I saw him walking into a high-rise last week. I think it&#8217;s a scam, and I&#8217;m going to bust his ass.&#8221;</p>
<p>His girlfriend snorted. &#8220;Whatever gets you that <strong>paycheck</strong>, hoss.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-13/comment-page-1/#comment-5090</link>
		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 23 May 2010 02:33:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Cathy: Excellent! Nuff said!</description>
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		<title>By: Cathy Miller</title>
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		<dc:creator>Cathy Miller</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 May 2010 14:37:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brett wondered how he got involved in this world. He was pretty sure those who called San Diego, America’s Finest City, had not strolled through this neighborhood.

This wasn’t the home of high-priced &lt;strong&gt;coke &lt;/strong&gt;dealers. Their clientele was up the coast, closer to where Brett worked as a homicide detective. It had been a long time since he had been to this part of San Diego, where cops were about as welcomed as a ship-bound &lt;b&gt;glacier&lt;/b&gt; off the coast of Alaska. 

He had the Birdcage Bandit to thank for his tour of this sad, &lt;strong&gt;cesspool &lt;/strong&gt;life the city had thrown away. The serial killer had terrorized the north beach community of Encinitas for over a year now. There had been 12 women murdered – their bodies dumped on the beaches of Encinitas, like left-over trash from the Over-the-Line tournament.

The media, with all their irreverence, coined the Birdcage nickname. Derived from the discovery of a birdcage ornament left with each victim, Brett seethed at its dehumanizing mockery.

The case had earned Brett the 15 minutes of fame he never wanted, much to the delight of the killer. The media christened him Maverick, from a paparazzi shot of Brett riding a horse. He didn’t know what he hated more, the incessant hounding of the media or the taunting notes the killer left at the crime scenes. It was the latest note that led Brett to this part of town.

&lt;em&gt;Dear Detective Maverick:&lt;/em&gt;
&lt;em&gt;I find it so entertaining to see how famous you have become. You should thank me, you know. Before me, you were a nobody – a worthless hack of a detective with all the appeal of an aging, balding &lt;strong&gt;womanizer&lt;/strong&gt;. You are such a loser!&lt;/em&gt;

&lt;em&gt;I am growing weary of our game. There is simply no challenge anymore. So, I’m upping my stakes. Take yourself south from the ocean shores. Travel to the &lt;strong&gt;rancid &lt;/strong&gt;side of life, where the toxic is laid to rest. You know it, don’t you, Detective Maverick – the place where you can see the concrete underbelly of broken dreams, where many leap from their pathetic lives. Go to the place, sliced by 5 and forgotten by most. There you will find the answer. But, hurry. I will not be so generous again.&lt;/em&gt;

“Barrio Logan,” was what popped into Brett’s mind. He’d bet his meager &lt;strong&gt;paycheck&lt;/strong&gt; on it.

Interstate 5 cuts off the industrial and low-income community that is a couple of miles from downtown San Diego. All the clues were there. Barrio Logan became a dumping site for toxic waste in the early 1990s, and the Coronado Bay Bridge split the community in two. More than a few suicide jumpers took their final dive off that bridge.

“But, why here? Is he playing us again?”

Brett vowed it would end today. He would expose the killer as the &lt;strong&gt;imposter&lt;/strong&gt; he was. The killer’s &lt;strong&gt;tablet&lt;/strong&gt;-sized notes of arrogance were really  &lt;strong&gt;just an illusion&lt;/strong&gt;. He was not the cunning, invincible portrait of evil. His overconfidence would blind him to his certain fate. It would end now, or Brett would abandon his &lt;strong&gt;shield&lt;/strong&gt; for good.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brett wondered how he got involved in this world. He was pretty sure those who called San Diego, America’s Finest City, had not strolled through this neighborhood.</p>
<p>This wasn’t the home of high-priced <strong>coke </strong>dealers. Their clientele was up the coast, closer to where Brett worked as a homicide detective. It had been a long time since he had been to this part of San Diego, where cops were about as welcomed as a ship-bound <b>glacier</b> off the coast of Alaska. </p>
<p>He had the Birdcage Bandit to thank for his tour of this sad, <strong>cesspool </strong>life the city had thrown away. The serial killer had terrorized the north beach community of Encinitas for over a year now. There had been 12 women murdered – their bodies dumped on the beaches of Encinitas, like left-over trash from the Over-the-Line tournament.</p>
<p>The media, with all their irreverence, coined the Birdcage nickname. Derived from the discovery of a birdcage ornament left with each victim, Brett seethed at its dehumanizing mockery.</p>
<p>The case had earned Brett the 15 minutes of fame he never wanted, much to the delight of the killer. The media christened him Maverick, from a paparazzi shot of Brett riding a horse. He didn’t know what he hated more, the incessant hounding of the media or the taunting notes the killer left at the crime scenes. It was the latest note that led Brett to this part of town.</p>
<p><em>Dear Detective Maverick:</em><br />
<em>I find it so entertaining to see how famous you have become. You should thank me, you know. Before me, you were a nobody – a worthless hack of a detective with all the appeal of an aging, balding <strong>womanizer</strong>. You are such a loser!</em></p>
<p><em>I am growing weary of our game. There is simply no challenge anymore. So, I’m upping my stakes. Take yourself south from the ocean shores. Travel to the <strong>rancid </strong>side of life, where the toxic is laid to rest. You know it, don’t you, Detective Maverick – the place where you can see the concrete underbelly of broken dreams, where many leap from their pathetic lives. Go to the place, sliced by 5 and forgotten by most. There you will find the answer. But, hurry. I will not be so generous again.</em></p>
<p>“Barrio Logan,” was what popped into Brett’s mind. He’d bet his meager <strong>paycheck</strong> on it.</p>
<p>Interstate 5 cuts off the industrial and low-income community that is a couple of miles from downtown San Diego. All the clues were there. Barrio Logan became a dumping site for toxic waste in the early 1990s, and the Coronado Bay Bridge split the community in two. More than a few suicide jumpers took their final dive off that bridge.</p>
<p>“But, why here? Is he playing us again?”</p>
<p>Brett vowed it would end today. He would expose the killer as the <strong>imposter</strong> he was. The killer’s <strong>tablet</strong>-sized notes of arrogance were really  <strong>just an illusion</strong>. He was not the cunning, invincible portrait of evil. His overconfidence would blind him to his certain fate. It would end now, or Brett would abandon his <strong>shield</strong> for good.</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-13/comment-page-1/#comment-3807</link>
		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Apr 2010 11:25:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Love, love, love it!</description>
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		<title>By: Troy Worman</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-13/comment-page-1/#comment-3797</link>
		<dc:creator>Troy Worman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Apr 2010 04:06:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>
 “This is the end of the line, Johnny,” she said as she pulled me from the trunk of her vanilla sedan. I hit the ground with a sticky thwack. Song stood over me in a skinny &lt;strong&gt;glacier&lt;/strong&gt; blue pantsuit and silver steel toe roach killers.
“Shane Arthur!” I spat. I was in the shallows of a &lt;strong&gt;cesspool&lt;/strong&gt; of broken characters. “What the name of…?” Her boot came down hard on my head driving it into the filth.
“I guess I will be earning my &lt;strong&gt;paycheck&lt;/strong&gt; this week,” she said stepping forward. I lifted my elbows to shield my face and she swung her steel toe into my ribs, rolling me over in the &lt;strong&gt;rancid&lt;/strong&gt; spillage.
“I will tell Velvet that you were an &lt;strong&gt;imposter&lt;/strong&gt;, a &lt;strong&gt;coke&lt;/strong&gt;head and a &lt;strong&gt;womanizer&lt;/strong&gt;. And of course, she will believe me. She always does.”
I looked up at her through bleary eyes and for the first time saw her for who she really was. Everything else was &lt;strong&gt;just an illusion&lt;/strong&gt;.
She pulled a micro-&lt;strong&gt;tablet&lt;/strong&gt; from her breast pocket. 
Her chrome quill glimmered in the translucent blue rays of the sun.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>“This is the end of the line, Johnny,” she said as she pulled me from the trunk of her vanilla sedan. I hit the ground with a sticky thwack. Song stood over me in a skinny <strong>glacier</strong> blue pantsuit and silver steel toe roach killers.<br />
“Shane Arthur!” I spat. I was in the shallows of a <strong>cesspool</strong> of broken characters. “What the name of…?” Her boot came down hard on my head driving it into the filth.<br />
“I guess I will be earning my <strong>paycheck</strong> this week,” she said stepping forward. I lifted my elbows to shield my face and she swung her steel toe into my ribs, rolling me over in the <strong>rancid</strong> spillage.<br />
“I will tell Velvet that you were an <strong>imposter</strong>, a <strong>coke</strong>head and a <strong>womanizer</strong>. And of course, she will believe me. She always does.”<br />
I looked up at her through bleary eyes and for the first time saw her for who she really was. Everything else was <strong>just an illusion</strong>.<br />
She pulled a micro-<strong>tablet</strong> from her breast pocket.<br />
Her chrome quill glimmered in the translucent blue rays of the sun.</p>
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		<title>By: Cleve</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-13/comment-page-1/#comment-1636</link>
		<dc:creator>Cleve</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Feb 2010 17:09:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, the aroma of the &lt;strong&gt;rancid cesspool&lt;/strong&gt; assaulted my senses! It was &lt;strong&gt;just an illusion&lt;/strong&gt; I know, but still... Quickly I slugged down a &lt;strong&gt;tablet&lt;/strong&gt; of aspirin with a sip of &lt;strong&gt;Coke&lt;/strong&gt;. &quot;Jowls, you old &lt;strong&gt;womanizer.&lt;/strong&gt; You&#039;ll get your &lt;strong&gt;paycheck&lt;/strong&gt; Friday with the rest of us. Get over it! Look, we&#039;ve got work to do. Let&#039;s climb over that ice &lt;strong&gt;shield&lt;/strong&gt; to the &lt;strong&gt;glacier&lt;/strong&gt; and track down that &lt;strong&gt;imposter&lt;/strong&gt;.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, the aroma of the <strong>rancid cesspool</strong> assaulted my senses! It was <strong>just an illusion</strong> I know, but still&#8230; Quickly I slugged down a <strong>tablet</strong> of aspirin with a sip of <strong>Coke</strong>. &#8220;Jowls, you old <strong>womanizer.</strong> You&#8217;ll get your <strong>paycheck</strong> Friday with the rest of us. Get over it! Look, we&#8217;ve got work to do. Let&#8217;s climb over that ice <strong>shield</strong> to the <strong>glacier</strong> and track down that <strong>imposter</strong>.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Content Marketing Diary &#124; Ghostwriter Dad</title>
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		<dc:creator>Content Marketing Diary &#124; Ghostwriter Dad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Feb 2010 08:03:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] written throughout the rest of the year. This is also what I did for the entries I wrote for both Creative Copy Challenge #13 and Challenge [...]</description>
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