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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Oct 2010 02:48:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Steven: This reminds me of The Wedding Crashers opening scene. Super funny.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Steven: This reminds me of The Wedding Crashers opening scene. Super funny.</p>
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		<title>By: Steven A. Lowe</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-11/comment-page-1/#comment-9173</link>
		<dc:creator>Steven A. Lowe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Oct 2010 01:58:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Loved and lost, loved and lost. My mantra: &quot;&lt;strong&gt;stupidity in the name of love&lt;/strong&gt;,&quot; ever since &lt;strong&gt;kindergarten&lt;/strong&gt;. I used to wear &lt;strong&gt;sorrow&lt;/strong&gt; like a &lt;strong&gt;goatee&lt;/strong&gt;. Now my mind is an &lt;strong&gt;asylum&lt;/strong&gt; for emotional refugees.

But it is also a &lt;strong&gt;deathtrap&lt;/strong&gt;.

Once embedded, I &lt;strong&gt;clobber&lt;/strong&gt; self-pity, which is the primary emotion of sorrow. It surrenders reluctantly, but inevitably, just as &lt;strong&gt;gunpowder&lt;/strong&gt; defeats a &lt;strong&gt;switchblade&lt;/strong&gt;.

&quot;That&#039;s all very interesting,&quot; said the couple, &quot;but we don&#039;t think you&#039;re the right marriage counselor for us.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Loved and lost, loved and lost. My mantra: &#8220;<strong>stupidity in the name of love</strong>,&#8221; ever since <strong>kindergarten</strong>. I used to wear <strong>sorrow</strong> like a <strong>goatee</strong>. Now my mind is an <strong>asylum</strong> for emotional refugees.</p>
<p>But it is also a <strong>deathtrap</strong>.</p>
<p>Once embedded, I <strong>clobber</strong> self-pity, which is the primary emotion of sorrow. It surrenders reluctantly, but inevitably, just as <strong>gunpowder</strong> defeats a <strong>switchblade</strong>.</p>
<p>&#8220;That&#8217;s all very interesting,&#8221; said the couple, &#8220;but we don&#8217;t think you&#8217;re the right marriage counselor for us.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-11/comment-page-1/#comment-5891</link>
		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Jun 2010 14:17:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Sara: Super Write! Nuff said!</description>
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		<title>By: Sara</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Jun 2010 09:15:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Your &lt;strong&gt;stupidity &lt;/strong&gt;will not qualify for your &lt;strong&gt;asylum&lt;/strong&gt;, dear brother,&quot; Shayna sneered, flicking her &lt;strong&gt;switchblade &lt;/strong&gt;out.

&lt;strong&gt;Sorrow &lt;/strong&gt;lined Adrian&#039;s face and his &lt;strong&gt;goatee &lt;/strong&gt;quivered as he asked, &quot;Please, dear sister? &lt;strong&gt;In the name of love&lt;/strong&gt;?&quot;

&quot;I&#039;ve been saving your ass since &lt;strong&gt;kindergarten&lt;/strong&gt;,&quot; she hissed. &quot;I never let a single bully &lt;strong&gt;clobber &lt;/strong&gt;you. And after all this time, this is the thanks I get.&quot;

&quot;I set the &lt;strong&gt;deathtrap &lt;/strong&gt;like you asked!&quot; he insisted, waving his &lt;strong&gt;gunpowder&lt;/strong&gt;-tipped fingers as evidence.

&quot;Yes, you idiot, and you fucked up,&quot; she said flatly, advancing on him. &quot;And now, I have to get rid of the trail that leads to me.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Your <strong>stupidity </strong>will not qualify for your <strong>asylum</strong>, dear brother,&#8221; Shayna sneered, flicking her <strong>switchblade </strong>out.</p>
<p><strong>Sorrow </strong>lined Adrian&#8217;s face and his <strong>goatee </strong>quivered as he asked, &#8220;Please, dear sister? <strong>In the name of love</strong>?&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;I&#8217;ve been saving your ass since <strong>kindergarten</strong>,&#8221; she hissed. &#8220;I never let a single bully <strong>clobber </strong>you. And after all this time, this is the thanks I get.&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;I set the <strong>deathtrap </strong>like you asked!&#8221; he insisted, waving his <strong>gunpowder</strong>-tipped fingers as evidence.</p>
<p>&#8220;Yes, you idiot, and you fucked up,&#8221; she said flatly, advancing on him. &#8220;And now, I have to get rid of the trail that leads to me.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-11/comment-page-1/#comment-4562</link>
		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 May 2010 13:04:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Cathy: You&#039;re in the zone with this story. Well done again.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Cathy: You&#8217;re in the zone with this story. Well done again.</p>
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		<title>By: Cathy Miller</title>
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		<dc:creator>Cathy Miller</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 May 2010 03:54:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It was sheer &lt;strong&gt;stupidity&lt;/strong&gt; for the Birdcage Bandit to keep playing his game. With each murder, he became increasingly bold, taking &lt;strong&gt;deathtrap&lt;/strong&gt; chances with his life. But, where was it written that murder followed rules?

Homicide detective, Brett Connors, had been working the case for a year. Each time he thought he had the killer, he found another woman, murdered &lt;strong&gt;in the name of love&lt;/strong&gt;. Or was that a game, too? The killer had called them whores, and his one true love. So much of it felt like he was playing them.

The press had a field day, speculating on the meaning behind the birdcage ornament, hanging from each victim’s toe. Now, homicide had something new – something they kept from the press. Lying beside the bloodstained bed of the latest victim was a &lt;strong&gt;switchblade&lt;/strong&gt;. 

The Gray Titan with the &lt;strong&gt;gunpowder&lt;/strong&gt;-colored handle was sold as “double edge, double action.” The coroner’s office confirmed this blade had seen a lot more than “double action.”

“Getting sloppy, asshole,” Brett murmured. Or had they gotten that close? At times, Brett swore he could feel the disturbed breath of the killer. What would they have found if they arrived five minutes sooner? Why didn’t he just &lt;strong&gt;clobber&lt;/strong&gt; the doorman who stood in his way? 

“Don’t go there – not yet,” Brett thought, but, it was hard not to. The latest victim was a &lt;strong&gt;kindergarten &lt;/strong&gt;teacher, for God’s sake. What had she ever done but try to start a kid’s life out right? He could still hear the wails of her mother’s &lt;strong&gt;sorrow&lt;/strong&gt;.

Witnesses saw someone running from the victim’s home. As was so often the case, the descriptions varied so much, you’d think an army of men had fled. He was bald – he had long hair. He had a &lt;strong&gt;goatee&lt;/strong&gt; – he was clean-shaven. What they had in the description department was a whole lot of nothing. Ouija boards and insane &lt;strong&gt;asylum&lt;/strong&gt; patients made more sense.

Somehow, Brett had to figure it out. It had gone on far too long. Far too many women had died. He couldn’t let it continue. He couldn’t destroy another family’s life.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It was sheer <strong>stupidity</strong> for the Birdcage Bandit to keep playing his game. With each murder, he became increasingly bold, taking <strong>deathtrap</strong> chances with his life. But, where was it written that murder followed rules?</p>
<p>Homicide detective, Brett Connors, had been working the case for a year. Each time he thought he had the killer, he found another woman, murdered <strong>in the name of love</strong>. Or was that a game, too? The killer had called them whores, and his one true love. So much of it felt like he was playing them.</p>
<p>The press had a field day, speculating on the meaning behind the birdcage ornament, hanging from each victim’s toe. Now, homicide had something new – something they kept from the press. Lying beside the bloodstained bed of the latest victim was a <strong>switchblade</strong>. </p>
<p>The Gray Titan with the <strong>gunpowder</strong>-colored handle was sold as “double edge, double action.” The coroner’s office confirmed this blade had seen a lot more than “double action.”</p>
<p>“Getting sloppy, asshole,” Brett murmured. Or had they gotten that close? At times, Brett swore he could feel the disturbed breath of the killer. What would they have found if they arrived five minutes sooner? Why didn’t he just <strong>clobber</strong> the doorman who stood in his way? </p>
<p>“Don’t go there – not yet,” Brett thought, but, it was hard not to. The latest victim was a <strong>kindergarten </strong>teacher, for God’s sake. What had she ever done but try to start a kid’s life out right? He could still hear the wails of her mother’s <strong>sorrow</strong>.</p>
<p>Witnesses saw someone running from the victim’s home. As was so often the case, the descriptions varied so much, you’d think an army of men had fled. He was bald – he had long hair. He had a <strong>goatee</strong> – he was clean-shaven. What they had in the description department was a whole lot of nothing. Ouija boards and insane <strong>asylum</strong> patients made more sense.</p>
<p>Somehow, Brett had to figure it out. It had gone on far too long. Far too many women had died. He couldn’t let it continue. He couldn’t destroy another family’s life.</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Apr 2010 02:52:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love this series, Troy. Fascinating stuff.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love this series, Troy. Fascinating stuff.</p>
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		<title>By: Troy Worman</title>
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		<dc:creator>Troy Worman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Apr 2010 02:27:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I had no idea what a sick fucker she was, but I was about the find out. Our next stop was the &lt;strong&gt;Asylum&lt;/strong&gt;, a popular haunt for flattish characters, a &lt;strong&gt;deathtrap&lt;/strong&gt; tonight. DJ &lt;strong&gt;Clobber &lt;/strong&gt;was spinning &lt;strong&gt;In the Name of Love&lt;/strong&gt; when we strode onto the club. 
 
Song wielded her chrome quill like a &lt;strong&gt;switchblade&lt;/strong&gt;.
 
After the carnage, I sat down next to Song at the bar. She poured me a drink. “This will wash down the &lt;strong&gt;sorrow&lt;/strong&gt;,” she laughed. I laughed, too.
 
Her &lt;strong&gt;gunpowder&lt;/strong&gt; perfume was exquisite. I leaned in to kiss her. And I woke up with her boot on my throat. Before meeting Song I hadn’t had my ass handed to me by a girl since &lt;strong&gt;kindergarten&lt;/strong&gt;.
 
“Your &lt;strong&gt;stupidity&lt;/strong&gt; is disappointing,” she said.
 
“And by the way, that &lt;strong&gt;goatee&lt;/strong&gt; isn’t working for you.”</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I had no idea what a sick fucker she was, but I was about the find out. Our next stop was the <strong>Asylum</strong>, a popular haunt for flattish characters, a <strong>deathtrap</strong> tonight. DJ <strong>Clobber </strong>was spinning <strong>In the Name of Love</strong> when we strode onto the club.<br />
 <br />
Song wielded her chrome quill like a <strong>switchblade</strong>.<br />
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After the carnage, I sat down next to Song at the bar. She poured me a drink. “This will wash down the <strong>sorrow</strong>,” she laughed. I laughed, too.<br />
 <br />
Her <strong>gunpowder</strong> perfume was exquisite. I leaned in to kiss her. And I woke up with her boot on my throat. Before meeting Song I hadn’t had my ass handed to me by a girl since <strong>kindergarten</strong>.<br />
 <br />
“Your <strong>stupidity</strong> is disappointing,” she said.<br />
 <br />
“And by the way, that <strong>goatee</strong> isn’t working for you.”</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-11/comment-page-1/#comment-1931</link>
		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Mar 2010 06:49:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;Cleve, that sounds like a couple of my teachers in middle school! Good write.&lt;/p&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cleve, that sounds like a couple of my teachers in middle school! Good write.</p>
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		<title>By: Cleve Horrocks</title>
		<link>http://www.creativecopychallenge.com/creative-copy-challenge-11/comment-page-1/#comment-1923</link>
		<dc:creator>Cleve Horrocks</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Mar 2010 22:09:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It really is sad all of the &lt;strong&gt;stupidity&lt;/strong&gt; we commit &lt;strong&gt;in the name of love&lt;/strong&gt;. I should be sent to the &lt;strong&gt;asylum&lt;/strong&gt; for dating that &lt;strong&gt;kindergarten&lt;/strong&gt; teacher. I walked right into her &lt;strong&gt;deathtrap&lt;/strong&gt; and had no idea of the danger I was in until I saw the &lt;strong&gt;switchblade&lt;/strong&gt; on the table and smelt the aroma of &lt;strong&gt;gunpowder&lt;/strong&gt; in the air. She looked like she was filled with &lt;strong&gt;sorrow&lt;/strong&gt; when she tried to &lt;strong&gt;clobber &lt;/strong&gt;me and missed. It really hurt man! She caught me on the side of the face, right above my &lt;strong&gt;goatee&lt;/strong&gt;. Now she&#039;s doing 15-20 in the state pen. The sad thing is, I really liked her, and so did class.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It really is sad all of the <strong>stupidity</strong> we commit <strong>in the name of love</strong>. I should be sent to the <strong>asylum</strong> for dating that <strong>kindergarten</strong> teacher. I walked right into her <strong>deathtrap</strong> and had no idea of the danger I was in until I saw the <strong>switchblade</strong> on the table and smelt the aroma of <strong>gunpowder</strong> in the air. She looked like she was filled with <strong>sorrow</strong> when she tried to <strong>clobber </strong>me and missed. It really hurt man! She caught me on the side of the face, right above my <strong>goatee</strong>. Now she&#8217;s doing 15-20 in the state pen. The sad thing is, I really liked her, and so did class.</p>
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